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,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系?!军c睛】本文結(jié)構緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我最大的個人變化是喜歡上讀書,接下來介紹我小時候不喜歡讀書,最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。5.書面表達每年的4月23日是世界讀書日,這個紀念日的意義在于推動更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開展“讀好書,促成長”活動,請你根據(jù)這項活動的主題,向全校同學發(fā)出倡議。讀書的意義 1. 獲取知識,開闊視野 2. 使人愉悅,益于學習 3. ……(自由發(fā)揮)現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多,無良好讀書習慣 2. 不知道讀什么書,不會選擇倡議 ……(至少兩點)注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文須包括所有要點,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life. First of all,reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books.It can also help to open up a whole new world to us.Second,reading will/can make us clever and happy.It is good for our study and it can help us grow up.Third,reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful. However,there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet. In my opinion,our school can have aReading Weekonce a term.Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so much,spend too much time doing,search the Internet,in my opinion,as a result等。同時First of all,/ Second,/ Third等時間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構副詞的運用,既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明,還豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。6.書面表達隨著電子時代的到來,西方文化如潮水般涌來,中國傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認為學校應當開設傳統(tǒng)文化課(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人認為沒有必要。假如你是Mike,請你用英語寫一封郵件,給你校英文報投稿寫一篇短文,詞數(shù)80左右,談談你對開設傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root (根) of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give student