【正文】 s _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。在你班的主題班會上，同學們進行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表你的觀點。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表自己的觀點。恰當?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。你認為自己學習上還要多花工夫。他們說（適當發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構(gòu)思提綱。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（舉例說明，適當發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。10．你是一位九年級的學生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對你關(guān)心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題，表達出自己的觀點（認為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。9． 書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。8．（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應該包含以下要點:1,學生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.，希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。結(jié)合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當發(fā)揮。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。有人認為學校應當開設傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認為沒有必要。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。t have a good habit of reading but often spen