【文章內容簡介】 安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計入總詞數Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應從以下幾個內容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化，并給出建議。短文應使用一般現在時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應合理安排幾個內容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。另外，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡單句結構，易于掌握，不容易出錯。但為提升文章檔次，也應穿插一些并列句結構或復合句，以及使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文有如下幾個特點：首先文章內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內容，并對細節(jié)進行補充和修飾，使內容更加充實、豐富。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。短文以一般現在時來敘述，注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數形式的變化。句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。6．題目②“持之以恒，方得始?！眻猿质且环N可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網站正在開展以“堅持”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅持的一件事（愛好，習慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談談自己的感受?！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現在時。書寫時要緊扣主題，文句通順。“跑步”，正文部分詳細地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅持跑步，到現在比以前會跑；結尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結構清晰，前后呼應。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語從句so…that …；比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語多彩、文句表達多樣。 ”7． 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想參加你校暑期為外國學生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li