【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，并對(duì)將來(lái)提出兩點(diǎn)希望。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過(guò)去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來(lái)，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)的變化。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的面貌，這一部分使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變成了過(guò)去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文章中語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。6．寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動(dòng)。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.What