【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 owledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句型?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。I think+賓語(yǔ)從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是…的。5． 假如你是李華, 你的美國(guó)筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。To: lihua@ china. From: bill006@ america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語(yǔ), 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語(yǔ)句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；: 不少于70詞（開頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題，結(jié)束全文。【點(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來(lái)朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。6．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（lucky money）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來(lái)源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少 3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方。【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money