【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來(lái)。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開(kāi)頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開(kāi)心的事情；最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。5． 假如你是李華, 你的美國(guó)筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。To: lihua@ china. From: bill006@ america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語(yǔ), 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語(yǔ)句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；: 不少于70詞（開(kāi)頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過(guò)描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。【詳解】首先回答職業(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問(wèn)題，結(jié)束全文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開(kāi)篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來(lái)朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。6． 書面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意]（1）表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。（4）詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help d