【正文】 interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。文章條理分明，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。句型：被動(dòng)句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。9．為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個(gè)選題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時(shí)去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門口2. 通過介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。要求：1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實(shí)姓名。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個(gè)故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。10．現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)（smartphone）越來越普及，很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文，談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。提示：在生活中你用智能手機(jī)做什么？智能手機(jī)對(duì)你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響？你對(duì)中學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)有什么看法？______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。