【正文】 圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采取郵件格式，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。句型：not only…but also；You39。d better …；I39。m looking forward to…。9．書面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會(huì)需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說(shuō)說(shuō)你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會(huì)充滿正能量。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2．語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。 作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵(lì)大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．書面表達(dá)4月28日，國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國(guó)北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開(kāi)幕式，提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”（fivepoint initiative on green development），為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國(guó)智慧。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”（Live Green, Live Better）? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）, 為?？庇⒄Z(yǔ)角”寫一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然，如：綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然，如：讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與，從身邊小事做起，如：適度節(jié)約，拒絕浪費(fèi)……；做到人與自然的和諧。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句：It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，make full use of充分利用， let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來(lái)