【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，充滿愛心學(xué)生…… （至少發(fā)揮兩點）周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多．舍棄愛好其它活動鍛煉，電視愿望…… （發(fā)揮一到兩點）要求：1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2．文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6．安全對每個人都很重要。請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求： 1. 語句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；2．短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。7． 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會相關(guān)報道，對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國文化。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。要點內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.