【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 eld a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20． 書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。一直以來，同學們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。在你班的主題班會上，同學們進行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表你的觀點。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；Make us less interested in studying；...Your opinion：要求：1．80詞以上。2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名?！緟⒖即鸢浮?**試卷處理標記，請不要刪除一、英語書面表達1．C解析：Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。2．C解析：例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關信息，要求考生對每個信息進行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字數(shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語的表達方式。避免漢語式英語。句型不要都用簡單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個信息都進行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對于城市A的缺點，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。對于優(yōu)點則重點突出，因為在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。在說選擇城市A的原因時，用了that引導的賓語從句。本文大部分都是復雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。3．B解析：Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點都表達出來，不要遺漏任何一個，書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。寫作亮點：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點的學生各自的理由，結構清晰，要點全面。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。考點：提綱類作文。4．D解析：Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。5．A解析：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life