【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony39。s mother wanted to keep watch on Tony39。s study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony39。s study and makes him respond strongly. From a child39。s point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don39。t think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children39。s learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文，根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下父母為了關(guān)心孩子的學(xué)習(xí)，想隨時(shí)監(jiān)控孩子的學(xué)習(xí)狀況，就這樣對(duì)嗎？仔細(xì)分析所提供的圖片內(nèi)容，主要從你的看法和建議這個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時(shí)，他們將來(lái)怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢？句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫投縄t will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會(huì)影響未來(lái)的自信心建設(shè)，也會(huì)導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童，形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽(yáng)光和雨露照耀并滋潤(rùn)著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“友善待人、快樂(lè)生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語(yǔ):kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問(wèn)題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（四川雅安中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。假如你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展主題為：“如何保護(hù)地球”的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。提示：1. 現(xiàn)在存在的環(huán)境問(wèn)題。2. 采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境。1） 關(guān)閉工廠，不亂扔垃圾。 2） 節(jié)約用水、用電的方法。3） 使用購(gòu)物袋代替塑料袋, 盡量乘坐公共交通。4） 回收利用廢品等。要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不記入字?jǐn)?shù)。Hello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well. Thanks for listening!【答案】How to Protect the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it bees dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. It39。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。s time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請(qǐng)你向他發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問(wèn)題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方并給出建議，需使用表達(dá)邀請(qǐng)和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語(yǔ)和句式，注意長(zhǎng)短搭配，并在行文中增加細(xì)節(jié)和過(guò)渡，使文章讀起來(lái)比較流暢。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析提示要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累和寫(xiě)作練習(xí)以外，還應(yīng)該適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文