【正文】 ，可以對文章重點的突出、主題的表現(xiàn)，起到“綠葉映襯紅花”的作用。直接體現(xiàn)中心思想的，所以要詳寫。有點有面地敘事，“面”上的內(nèi)容往往是渲染氣氛，交代背景，起烘托的作用。事情的發(fā)展過程，是整個事情，或者整篇文章中的主體部分，它往往具體體現(xiàn)中心思想，因而要詳寫。事情的發(fā)生階段，往往是交代時間、地點、人物，以及起因，事情的結(jié)果部分，往往是寫出事情的結(jié)局或點明事情的中心。雕塑是這樣，寫作文也是這樣，只有圍繞中心安排詳寫和略寫，敘事的重點才能突出。羅丹的雕像是要表現(xiàn)巴爾扎克的精神、氣質(zhì)，現(xiàn)在那雙手（次要部分）突出了，人們看了雕像，只欣賞手的完美，而忽略了主要的內(nèi)容。學(xué)生們不禁連聲地說：“好極了，老師，我可從沒見過這樣一雙奇妙的手?。　绷_丹的臉上笑容消失了。羅丹為什么要砍掉巴爾扎克雕像的雙手呢？原來，在一個深夜里，羅丹好不容易完成了巴爾扎克的雕像，非常滿意，連夜叫醒了他的學(xué)生來欣賞雕像。法國巴黎藝術(shù)館里，陳列了一座偉大的文學(xué)家巴爾扎克的雕像，奇怪的是：他的雕像卻沒有手。有相當(dāng)一部分同學(xué)，思路比較狹窄，他們的目光只注意好人好事，作文的材料老是不能擴大。只要我們開動腦筋，對常見的材料改變一下敘述的角度，也會讓它放出異彩。同學(xué)們在作文時，所敘述的事往往是常見的。一般來說，同學(xué)們的生活圈子小，家庭、教室、操場。住在城里的人，恐怕都見過老年人跳迪斯科吧？可是有的同學(xué)熟視無睹，竟然讓這樣的材料從眼皮底下悄悄溜走了。那么是不是我們同學(xué)生活圈子小，就沒有新鮮、獨特的材料可以寫呢？不是的。常聽一些同學(xué)說，我們是學(xué)生，生活貧乏，看不出有什么新鮮、獨特的事情值得記敘。能把自己那些與眾不同的經(jīng)歷作為選材的內(nèi)容，那么，你所選擇的材料一定是自己獨有的，新鮮生動的。記好人好事，總是寫“拾皮夾”、“讓座”、“為人補課”，不管此事自巳是否經(jīng)歷過，是否有感觸。于是語文老師常常在他們的作文后面寫上類似的評語：選材陳舊，希望今后選擇新穎、獨特的材料?？傊?，我們只要提高自己的思想水平，對聽到或看到的事深入地想一番，認(rèn)識它的意義，鑒別它的價值，并把它放在特定的環(huán)境中去寫，就能從小事中寫出深意來。這段話的結(jié)尾處，犯有“拔高”文章思想意義的毛病。因此，我們在具體寫的時候，避免在提示事情所蘊含的意義時候犯任意“拔高”的毛病。“事”與“意”的榫頭要對得合適。背景就是時代環(huán)境，指的是社會變遷和政治動態(tài)等。這樣，就能有敏感的頭腦和銳利的好眼力，挖掘、尋找出事情中所蘊含的深意。深入思考、分析、挖掘、尋找出事情所蘊含的深意。然而人和照相機畢竟不同，雙眼是帶著感情去選鏡頭的?！衲敲矗鯓訌男∈轮袑懗錾钜饽?？提高思想水平，訓(xùn)練一副見微知著的好眼力。自古以來，好文章數(shù)也數(shù)不盡，大多寫的也是平凡的、細(xì)小的事。有些同學(xué)看見別的同學(xué)寫出一些好文章來，便驚嘆道：“這些內(nèi)容，我也熟悉的，怎么我沒能把它們寫出來！”這個問題值得深思，說穿了，那是因為你缺乏從小事中寫出深意的能力。需要指出的是，在運用插敘時不能打亂原來的敘述線索，要注意與上下文的銜接。運用插敘。需要指出的是，運用倒敘的寫法，必須注意交代清楚倒敘的起訖點，順敘和倒敘的轉(zhuǎn)換處要有明顯的界限、必要的文字過渡。運用倒敘。因此，作者常常要根據(jù)事情發(fā)生、發(fā)展、高潮、結(jié)局這一事情發(fā)展的規(guī)律來進行敘述，文章的層次也是清楚、明了的。按時間順序進行敘述時，必須嚴(yán)格地安排好順序，寫清楚敘述的時間。順敘有以時間為順序的，有以事物發(fā)展規(guī)律為順序的，也有以空間變換為順序的。這樣寫，可以將事物的發(fā)展過程，有頭有尾地敘述出來，來龍去脈，十分清楚?！衲敲?，怎樣安排記敘順序才能使文章條理清楚呢？運用順敘。要做到記敘的條理分明，必須在動筆之前，仔細(xì)地想一想，文章應(yīng)該先寫什么，再寫什么，然后寫什么，把記敘的輪廓整理出來。確定記敘的順序以后，還要安排好段落層次。記敘的條理要清晰。在記敘文六個方面的內(nèi)容中，起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果，是構(gòu)成事情最主要的環(huán)節(jié)。如“雞喔喔叫了起來”，就是指天將亮了；“西邊的太陽就要落山了”，指的是傍晚，等等。然而，交代這六個方面內(nèi)容不應(yīng)該呆板，要根據(jù)文章的需要靈活掌握。第二篇：記敘文寫作方法●那么，怎樣記敘好一件簡單的事呢？要交代清楚事情發(fā)生的地點、時間；要把事情的經(jīng)過、因果寫明白。It happened during the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway a woman bought her ticket, she put her purse back into her bag and ready to leave, when a middleaged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”.She didn’t feel anything unusual and went into the , her purse had been stolen by that our surprise, the thief seemed not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and he was searching for the next that time some passersby, including me, witnessed the unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：交待事件背景；描述扒竊事件的經(jīng)過和最后結(jié)果；譴責(zé)這種不文明的現(xiàn)象，提出解決建議。)【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。inspire others and outdo the self)也展示了作者深厚的語言功底。而其中所使用的句式和詞匯(melt the ice in one’s heart。第二段通過對具體事例的敘述將人物的性格特點表現(xiàn)得淋漓盡致，也豐富了best friend這個稱謂的具體內(nèi)涵。第三段進行綜合敘述。大多數(shù)人物記敘文都遵循一個比較固定的寫作套路，即:第一段敘述文中人物與作者的關(guān)系，并對人物進行綜合評價。量體溫 take one’s temperature輪流照顧某人 take care of turns / take turns at caring have/run a high fever 健康狀況 health / condition 請假 ask for a(sick)leave / ask for a fourday leave / be on sick leave習(xí)作練習(xí)I Directions: write a passage on the title My Best Friend.(You can follow the outline given below: 。t long before an ambulance roommate brought a blanket for supported him in the teacher insisted on giving him some he a suspected sars patient? who can tell ? but we didn39。t ：when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own 、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or 、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful 、范文about nine o39。clock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a ：his head was aching so intensely that he kept forehead felt very took his was ℃.（展開描述一下事件）第二段：主題句：without hesitation, i dialed “120”.it wasn39。clock one evening in _______, ：________.（展開描述一下事件）第二段：主題句：without hesitation, wasn39。英文記敘文寫作模板第一部分、記敘文題型作文寫作步驟要求考生寫一篇記敘文，描述事件發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因、人物及結(jié)果，最后對事件進行簡單分析。21)Time tries ，日久見人心。19)No cross, no ，不能見彩虹。17)Never do things by 。15)Love me little, love me ，而貴久。13)Good pany on the road is the shortest 。11)Fine feature makes fine ，馬靠鞍裝。9)A young idler, an old ，老大徒傷悲。7)All things are difficult before they are 。5)All roads lead to 。3)A good example is the best 。記敘文常用句式——首段：交代主題? It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.? All through my senior high school, I couldn’t forget …? In the years that followed the event frequently floated in my mind/often recurred to my memory/kept haunting me.? Last week, when I was on my way home something terrible happened.? I quickly turned around, just in time to see the whole process of the ? The event took place/happened/occurred in the early morning.? The whole story happened the(first)day I entered the senior high ——主體部分：（一）作者心理活動的描寫? I could hardly believe my eyes.? I felt as if I were on top of the world.? I was pletely shocked.? I was bursting with joy.（二）人物外貌和性格的描寫? He is of medium height.? He is goodlooking/ordinarylooking.? She is plump/slim, with fair skin and curly hair.? He looks handsome in a sports suit/blue jeans.? He is of mild/bad temper.? At first glance, you would say he is the perfect image of an obedient boy, but deep down, he is not that way at all.（三）物體的描寫? It es in a variety of colors/shapes.? It consists of several integrated parts.? It is shaped like a circle.? It is flat in shape and small in size.? Attached to the bottom is…（四）景物的描寫? There is a wonderful array of flowers along the street.? The air is filled with the scent of roses.? The trees stood there on guard for generations, with branches reaching out like a canopy over the road.? I feel miserably insignificant approaching the mountain.? Even judging by modern standards, the town was large in population.? The campus has a unique 、格言(以字母為序)1)A friend to everybody is a friend to ，沒有真朋友。(1)有些排比結(jié)構(gòu)是通過連詞來實現(xiàn)的。即檢查：(1)動詞時態(tài)是否正確(還包括主句與從句中的謂語動詞時態(tài))；(2)主謂語是否一致；(3)代詞的指代關(guān)系是否清楚；’(4)動賓搭配是否合適；(5)用詞是否錯誤；(6)冠詞；(7)大小寫、標(biāo)點符號；(8)漏寫、誤寫和拼寫錯誤。如：We were very much surprised． Mary refused the invitation．W