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【正文】 features as這個短語，使文章的語言更加高級和生動。 ［寫作內(nèi)容］ 介紹 1. 觸摸屏 , 第五代 iphone 2. 獨創(chuàng)的 , 被認為世界上最好的智能機 外型 與 iphone 3相似 , 黑白兩種顏色 功能 1. 電池功能強大 , 支持 200小時待機時間 (standly time), 8小時 3G通話時間 2. 照相系統(tǒng)提高 3. 用聲音指示手機發(fā)短信等 4. 它能理解你說的話 , 給你幫助 [參考范文 ] The iPhone 4, a touchscreen smart phone, which is the fifth generation of the iPhone, is considered groundbreaking and the best smart phone in the world. Coming in two colors, black and white, it retains(保留 )almost all of the same design features as its predecessor (前身 ), the iPhone 3. However, with more powerful battery, it has 200 hours standby time and 8 hours talk time on 3G. What is more, the camera inside it is greatly developed. What is most amazing is that not only can you order it to do things like sending messages with your voice but also it can understand what you say and offer you help. [精華點評 ] 這是對一個新的電子產(chǎn)品的描述 , 考生可以使用生動的語言描述 , 避免文章枯燥無味。”看上去似乎有三個分句 , 但其實通過邏輯分析，這個句子用一個簡單句就可以表示出來 (“奧運會從只用三項射擊項目穩(wěn)步發(fā)展到現(xiàn)今的 17項” ), 也就是學(xué)生只需要使用 develop steadily from...to...這個詞組就可以把這個句子表述清楚了。如第一個信息點的“生存工具” , 考生容易翻譯為 “ the tool of survival” , 但在這里用 tool是不貼切的 , 射擊不是實物 , 應(yīng)該是指“生存的方式” , 所以考生應(yīng)該用 “ the means of survival/the means of making a living”更貼切。 (3)1928：中斷 (23) Shooting was suspended in 1904 and 1928. (4) 1932：重回奧運會 (4) It returned to the Games in 1932. 合并： Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896, but it was suspended in 1904 and 1928. It didn’ t return to the Games until 1932. /Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Then, it was suspended in 1904 and 1928 but finally returned to the Games in 1932. [參考范文 ] Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to pete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 4. 連句成文。 (1)Shooting originated as a means of survival. (2)19世紀末才發(fā)展成為一項體育運動。 句 1： (1) 射擊 ________ (2) 生存工具 _____________________ (3)直到 …… 才 …
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