【正文】 真題演練 ? （ 2022年 3月） 大作文： ? 圖表：在美國(guó)，超重的孩子逐年上升，分析原因和后果。 真題演練 ? (2022年 3月 ) 看圖作文，第一個(gè)圖是爺爺送小孩上學(xué)，小孩高興地說(shuō)：終于可以上學(xué)了。 真題演練 ?（ 2022年 9月）大作文： ?小學(xué)生參加軍訓(xùn)，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你分析一下這個(gè)情況。另外，在使用一些修辭方法和英語(yǔ)習(xí)語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，要注意盡量避免老套的比喻或盡人皆知的習(xí)語(yǔ)。 ? Once a man is dead, he can’t be brought back to life. ? 再如 The mittee refused to listen to our request. 如果被改成 ? The mittee turned a deaf ear to our request. 句子生動(dòng)，增加了文采。這里雖然用了比喻，但更改了原來(lái)的主語(yǔ)，句子顯得羅嗦、笨拙。如： ? Once a man is dead, there is no helping。 ? 在考慮英語(yǔ)句式的變化時(shí) , 我們一般從以下幾個(gè)方面入手 : ? (1) 既可以用主動(dòng)式也可以用被動(dòng)式 , 例如 : ? 例 1： Today, we use machines not only in industry but in other sectors of national economy as well. ? Today machines are widely used not only in industry but in other sectors of national economy as well. ? 例 2： Some people believe that it will be possible for automatic machines to replace pletely in the future. ? It is believed by some people that it will be possible for automatic machines to be replaced pletely in the future. ? (3) 某些修飾成分既可以用在句子前面也可以用在后面 , 還可以用在中間 , 例如 : ? 例 1： With a car, people can get around freely. ? People can get around freely with a car. ? 例 2： In fact, speaking is one of the most important means of munication. ? Speaking is in fact one of the most important means of munication. ? (4) 既可以是正常語(yǔ)序也可以是倒裝語(yǔ)序 , 例如 : ? 例 1： A new type of TV set was among the products on display. ? Among the products on display was a new type of TV set. ? 例 2： We did not realize the problem of energy crisis until the end of last century. ? Not until the end of last century did we realize the problem of energy crisis. ? (5) 既可以用簡(jiǎn)單句也可以用并列句或者主從復(fù)合句 , 例如 : ? 例 1： Nowadays a lot of people work in office, spending most of their time indoors. ? Nowadays a lot of people work in office and they spend most of their time indoors. ? 例 2： There are many means of getting information and they enable us to keep up with what is going on in the world. ? There are many means of getting information which enable us to keep up with what is going on in the world. ? ? 適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┬揶o手法如比喻、夸張、排比、擬人等能更形象、更深刻地說(shuō)明事理，增加文章的活力。t rain. ? 例 2： Their daily lives don’t provide them with the exercise needed to keep them healthy. ? Their daily lives fail to provide them with the exercise needed to keep them healthy. ? ? 要達(dá)到語(yǔ)言的生動(dòng)性，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就要經(jīng)常地變換句型和句子結(jié)構(gòu)及表達(dá)思想的方式。t found anything yet. He added that he was sorry to have missed me. ? 這里出現(xiàn)的是一連串的短句，讀起來(lái)使人感到單調(diào)乏味，而且各句之間所固有的邏輯關(guān)系沒(méi)能用句法手段表達(dá)出來(lái)。在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)當(dāng)交錯(cuò)使用長(zhǎng)句和短句，使句子的長(zhǎng)短多樣化，增加語(yǔ)言的表現(xiàn)力。長(zhǎng)句結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜、容量大，能表達(dá)比較復(fù)雜的內(nèi)容，敘事具體、說(shuō)理嚴(yán)密。平淡無(wú)味的句子會(huì)使人生厭，注意力分散。但是，無(wú)目的地重復(fù)會(huì)導(dǎo)致笨拙。過(guò)多地使用從句會(huì)把次要的與主要的概念混為一談，削弱句子的重點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)看下面各例： ? 1） Owing to the fact that I had a lot of work to do, it wasn’t possible for me to accept their invitation. ? 本句要表達(dá)的意思很簡(jiǎn)單，可是一堆空洞的短語(yǔ)使句子顯得很累贅，改為下面的句子就簡(jiǎn)潔明了多了。 寫(xiě)作要求精練，因?yàn)椋?jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)能起到更加強(qiáng)調(diào)的作用。 40）字、 12句話、 4段式 2025分鐘、 20分題 ? 三類(lèi)命題 ： 1. 提綱； 2. 圖畫(huà) + 提綱； 3. 圖表 + 提綱 ? 要求： 內(nèi)容切題 表達(dá)清晰 意義連貫 語(yǔ)言規(guī)范 ? 方法： ? 認(rèn)真審題 ? 列出提綱 ? 快速寫(xiě)作 ? 增添亮點(diǎn) ? 修改謄正 圖畫(huà)式作文 之 黃金模版 ? 反映現(xiàn)實(shí)，表贊成型 ： ? Part 1—As is shown in the picture,…No one can deny that…To take …for example… ? Part 2—There are several causes for…First…Second…Finally… ( 2 paragraphs) ? Part 3—Thus, these are the reasons why we must… 圖畫(huà)式作文 之 黃金模版 ? 揭露現(xiàn)實(shí)，表反駁型 ： ? Part 1—It can be seen from the cartoon/picture that…Nowadays there is much discussion as to the phenomenon that…This is indeed a problem that we should not neglect any more. ? Part 2—There are many reasons for the problem. In the first place…Secondly…What is more… ( 2 paragraphs) ? Part 3—From what has been discussed above, we may see that it is time for us to take measures to…The first step is …And then…Finally… 或者 To summarize…h(huán)as already caused public attention. And we should take effective measures suggested above to… 3part Writing ? Opening paragraph ? Body paragraphs ? Concluding paragraph Opening Paragraph ? An opening sentence ? Thesis statement Body paragraphs ? Par. 1 A. topic sentence B. supporting sentences 1, 2, 3,etc. C. concluding sentence ? Par. 2 A. to