【正文】 SharingIt’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. 。，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 某英語教育網(wǎng)站正在舉辦有關(guān)分享的主題征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷寫一篇題為“Sharing”的英語短文。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, municate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。My name is Susan. There are many rules in my 【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play puter games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to municate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，針對(duì)父母對(duì)你要求過多你感到厭煩這一問題，你是如何解決的。（3）你決定與父母多交流，為父母做些家務(wù)。天津中考模擬）假設(shè)你是 Susan，在家里你的父母總是對(duì)你有很多要求，你是否有時(shí)感到厭煩？你是怎樣解決的？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示用英語寫一篇短文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Wele to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whateveritis and say how delicious it is. If you feel unfortable with this, you can just say thank you |in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think it39。15．（在語言上要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。我們可以按照總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)來寫。【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。第三小組......提示詞： 贈(zèng)送 present 用過的 used注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞；2. 補(bǔ)充好本小組討論情況；3. 要點(diǎn)完整，層次清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地名、校名等。第一小組把我們用過的書本和學(xué)習(xí)用品贈(zèng)送給七年級(jí)、八年級(jí)的弟弟妹妹， 尤其是家庭貧困的同學(xué)。14．（（3） I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. 我在等過馬路的時(shí)候看到了這起事故。（2） He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. 他試圖停車，但為時(shí)已晚。重點(diǎn)句型：（1）While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. 當(dāng)紅燈變紅的時(shí)候，一個(gè)騎自行車的女孩突然出現(xiàn)在街上。At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street．I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was ing. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But fortunately, after making an examination, the girl was all right. The girl was still riding while the light is red, so she was responsible for the accident．We should pay attention to safety when crossing the also should obey the traffic rules.【解析】【詳解】首先這是一篇以一般過去時(shí)為主的文章，所以要注意時(shí)態(tài)。你的建議如何做到安全出行（補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)具體做法）參考詞匯：檢查make an examination 對(duì)……負(fù)責(zé) be responsible for sth.要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè).（2）短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，女孩并無大礙。時(shí)間星期五早上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)中山路和幸福大街交口事故過程。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)，星期五早上在上學(xué)的路上目睹了一起交通事故。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來自不同國家的同學(xué)介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。12．（這里可以寫感謝自己的母親在初中鼓勵(lì)我參加演講比賽。需要