【正文】 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說。最后向Bill提出問題，結(jié)束全文。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動(dòng)。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。請以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 為題寫一篇短文。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。初寫短文。修改潤色。河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時(shí)、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動(dòng)詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式。廣東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時(shí)態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。請以“初中生活的最后一刻”作為寫一篇應(yīng)該約120字的文章。用到的短語可以有：speak in public 在公共場合說話，worried about 擔(dān)心，encouraged me to 鼓勵(lì)我去做…，take part in the activity 參加活動(dòng)，was shocked by 被…震驚，let her down讓她失望，encouragement and pany 鼓勵(lì)和陪伴，made such great progress取得如此大的進(jìn)步。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時(shí)間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?；顒?dòng)，最后歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。事故原因女孩騎車時(shí)闖紅燈，因此她對事故負(fù)有責(zé)任。重點(diǎn)詞匯短語：traffic accident交通事故；across the road過馬路；suddenly突然地；At the same time同時(shí)；fell down摔倒；send sb to Sp把某人送到某地；make an examination檢查； be responsible for sth. 對……負(fù)責(zé)；pay attention to注意；fortunately幸運(yùn)地。try to do sth努力做某事。四川中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)本周你們班召開了一次主題班會(huì)“畢業(yè)前，我能為學(xué)校做些什么？”大家踴躍發(fā)言，作為第三小組成員，請你根據(jù)各小組的情況匯報(bào)以及你們小組的討論情況，寫一個(gè)總結(jié)交給老師。What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.【答案】What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫出一個(gè)班會(huì)會(huì)后的總結(jié)。 首先引出此次班會(huì)的主題；其次分別寫出三個(gè)小組的討論結(jié)果；最后可以對三個(gè)小組進(jìn)行總結(jié)，表達(dá)情感。浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是Amy，德國的交換生Sara下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中，她詢問如下信息：1．你家情況；；3. 她要承擔(dān)的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)；4. …現(xiàn)在，你就她提出的問題給她回信，也預(yù)祝她在你家過得開心！要求：1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 字?jǐn)?shù)約110詞。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。16．（（4）你認(rèn)為……。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。構(gòu)思提綱。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。注意：，并