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I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to municate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,針對父母對你要求過多你感到厭煩這一問題,你是如何解決的。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。SharingIt’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. 。修改潤色。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。(3)你決定與父母多交流,為父母做些家務(wù)。而復雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。我們可以按照總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)來寫。14.(At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street.I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was ing. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But fortunately, after making an examination, the girl was all right. The girl was still riding while the light is red, so she was responsible for the accident.We should pay attention to safety when crossing the also should obey the traffic rules.【解析】【詳解】首先這是一篇以一般過去時為主的文章,所以要注意時態(tài)。天津中考模擬)書面表達,星期五早上在上學的路上目睹了一起交通事故。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,向來自不同國家的同學介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。回顧過去,我們一定想特別感謝某人,或者有些我們感到特別遺憾的事情,或者是一些令人難忘的時刻。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況,并結(jié)合自身的實際情況,講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。參考詞匯:霧霾haze注意:1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;2. 語言通順,句子連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;3. 詞數(shù)80左右,信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,安排合理。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成,開頭引出話題;第二部分為中心,具體描述事情的過程;最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。9.(通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當增加內(nèi)容。寫作時,避免漢語式英語。山東中考模擬)為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個選題。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39?!军c睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認真閱讀題目要求,結(jié)合所給材料確定內(nèi)容,不能跑題偏題。5.(請選取一個方面,結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀惝敃r的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。請根據(jù)提示,以How Can We get relaxed為題,寫一篇短文。用現(xiàn)在完成時。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. In the past , I had a lot of free time. In my free time , I used to take more exercise to lose weight. My life has changed a lot since I got into a good high school. I have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。內(nèi)容包括:時間:農(nóng)歷五月初五地點:學校操場目的:深入了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容:文化展覽歷史介紹:兩千多年,紀念屈原體驗民間活動:賽龍舟,包粽子活動意義:1.它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. 【答案】Dear David,Thank you so much for your mail. I39。小節(jié)2:進初三以來在學習和生活方面發(fā)生