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【正文】 例 – A traffic accident中心段賞析 It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st).（ 補(bǔ)充說明時(shí)間 ） I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car. （ 事情的起因 ） I saw a man knocked down by a black car. Soon many cars were jammed there. I got there and found that beside a black Benz lay a middleaged man in a pool of blood. （ 交代一些細(xì)節(jié) ） The street turned chaotic.（ 事情的大致經(jīng)過 ） After a moment, the police and an ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（ 事情的結(jié)果 ） 注意空間的移動(dòng)： I got there… 例 – A traffic accident結(jié)尾段賞析 結(jié)尾段： 可 適當(dāng) 發(fā)表一點(diǎn)議論 In my opinion, the pedestrian should have taken the overpass when crossing the street. Besides, the driver might have driven too fast, regardless of such bad weather. Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided if we bee aware of the importance of safety.（結(jié)尾） 一檔作文鑒賞 Last year, a terrible flu spread across the whole school. One of my classmate, John/Jane Doe, became a victim of it. He/She ran a high fever, and ordinary medicine didn’t work on him. The news quickly reached everybody in our class. Some classmates recorded the English lessons for him so that he/she could keep up with his/her studies. Our English teacher called on him/her at the weekends sometimes. With care and help, he/she was soon able to be up and about and finally came back to the class. From this event, I learn two things. One is that with love, no illness or difficulty is terrible. The other is that love and help are twoway streets. Our classmates offered John/Jane Doe kind help partly because he/she himself/herself had always been a helpful person. So I realize that when we help others, we are helping ourselves. In the summer sports meeting last year, one of my classmates, John/Jane Doe, suddenly fell to the ground and hurt her left foot when he/she was practicing high jump. His/Her face turned pale and showed great pain. Seeing this, our classmates immediately came to her aid. They struggled to take her to the temporary emergency room. One boy untied his/her shoe and applied ice rocks to his/her wound. Meanwhile, girls forted her in a soft voice. Soon the . teacher came. He checked his/her sound and took some emergency measures to lessen her pain. Fifteen minutes later, the ambulance arrived and she was sent to hospital. Luckily enough, with our care and concern, John/Jane Doe recovered quickly. Such an incident impressed everyone present. I realize that love and care are the best medicine for an injured person Last Friday, my classmate John was absent because he suddenly caught a heavy flu and ran a high fever.（時(shí)間、人 物、事件交代清晰） After school, we three volunteer students, together with our class teacher went to see him. John stayed in bed and had a running nose. He told us that he was anxious about his studies. On hearing that, we promised him we would try our best to help. Therefore, in the following days, we arranged ourselves to teach him every day in turn, hoping to ensure that he would catch up with us when he came back to school.（條理 清楚，因果關(guān)系合乎邏輯，細(xì)節(jié)描寫恰到好處） In my opinion, no one is born to live alone. We should love, care and help each other
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