【正文】 讓你發(fā)現(xiàn)其中更讓人心動的美。若不是空間的距離，呈現(xiàn)在世人眼前的蒙娜麗莎只是一幅銹跡斑斑的老畫；若不是時間的距離，我們也無法為牛郎織女“金風(fēng)玉露一相逢”的相會而動情；若不是心靈的距離，我們也不會覺得柏拉圖式的愛情如此唯美動人??正如漫畫所示，距離讓老人驚羨于藝術(shù)品的精美，然而沒有距離卻只能讓他看見它的陰影。距離產(chǎn)生美，何妨保持適當距離，去領(lǐng)略玫瑰花香，去欣賞群星閃爍?！军c評】作者從漫畫的主人公入手進行立意，看出花瓶得與未得的心理距離影響他的價值判斷，寫距離之美，立意較為精準。在論證思路上，作者先由自然哲理入手提出觀點，然后探因析果，接著進一步推進——要保持適當?shù)木嚯x，然后從橫向展開分析，最后從時間、空間、心靈三個維度加以拓展，以此為基礎(chǔ)收束全文。該文的另一個特點是用例較能彰顯文化底蘊，文、史、哲的材料很豐富，體現(xiàn)出作者的人文素養(yǎng)，但用例太多明顯削弱了文章的理性思維，這是考生們今后要注意的問題。第三篇：高考英語漫畫作文技巧高考英語漫畫作文英語漫畫作文，即根據(jù)漫畫所描繪的內(nèi)容，按照要求和提示寫一篇英語短文。英語漫畫作文常以諷刺畫和幽默畫為主，要求學(xué)生解讀畫面，展開想象，議論，揭示自己對生活的理解，從而達到諷刺或教育的目的。漫畫作文多以敘述結(jié)合議論為主。體裁：議論文。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱：第三人稱 漫畫作文寫作三步驟： 1)描述From the cartoon we can see that…..It is a mon phenomenon in today’s picture shows a mon picture describes an interesting the picture, there are…/…is(are)doing…The picture above is about … 2)闡明原因It seems very ridiculous that….However, this kind of story is performed is the exact reflection of…The picture indicates that we….This is a satirical(諷刺的)cartoon which describes vividly a kind of mon phenomenon among… 3)提出對策As parents, we should take some effective measures for our children’s think/believe that…..It is better /advisable to…I consider it necessary…常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞表示平行、對等或選擇關(guān)系and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示對比關(guān)系on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...表示因果關(guān)系so, therefore, as a result(of), because, owing to, due to, thanks 、順序關(guān)系first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing...for another, in the end,表示遞進、強調(diào)關(guān)系besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still, above all表示解釋、說明關(guān)系such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, in fact 表示結(jié)論in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion 較復(fù)雜句型 被動語態(tài)People suggest that the conference be put is suggested that the conference be put She walked out of the room and many students followed by many students, she walked out of the room從句To his surprise, the little girl knew so many surprised him was that the little girl knew so many The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the Regular radio broadcasts began in was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved。第四篇：高考英語漫畫作文書面表達漫畫類先描述圖畫 再發(fā)表自己看法范文：簡要描述圖片，并談?wù)勀銓W(xué)生在業(yè)余時間參加過多的補習(xí)和培訓(xùn)的看法。（一）內(nèi)容要點：1． 描述文字說明：1）學(xué)生被迫上很多補習(xí)班2）無興趣可言2． 議論文字說明：1）太多的補習(xí)班是浪費時間2）學(xué)習(xí)要有興趣3）家長不要強迫孩子參加補習(xí)4）表達希望（二）One possible version:Look at this will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”.He has to go to so many training classes besides his school is no fun at all for and weekends have bee dull is too tired to learn these lessons well with no my opinion, sparetime training courses are a waste of time for many might do better when they show interest in what they are don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!練習(xí)1．根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。短文須包括以下要點，不得逐條翻譯。；；；。We Want Our Schoolbags LighterThe girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure”As is wellknown, we Chinese students which our teachers have given that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.第五篇：高考漫畫類材料作文審題指導(dǎo)高考漫畫類材料作文審題【寫作指導(dǎo)】漫畫式材料是材料作文中一種非常重要的形式，在十幾年來的高考作文中屢?漫畫是一種具有諷刺性或幽默性的繪畫。漫畫歌頌真善美，抨擊假丑惡，是針砭時弊的銳利思想武器。著名漫畫理論家方成說：“漫畫也是一種語言形式，漫畫就是畫思想?！甭嬀褪窃诤唵蔚臉?gòu)圖中承載著深刻的思想內(nèi)涵。漫畫多從生活現(xiàn)象中取材，寓言漫畫、幽默漫畫漫畫既然屬于材料作文之列，那么在審題立意方面還要遵循材料作文的基本規(guī)律。但漫畫式作文畢竟不同于文字閱讀，它有自身的特點，因此審題立意時要遵循其規(guī)律特點：掌握分析漫畫的方法。①按觀察畫面的常規(guī)，要仔細觀察畫中的人（服飾、表情、動作及人物間相或由上而下，或由左而右，或由里而外，或由前而后，或與上面完全相反。要看文字，文字有交代背景，比如時間、地點、環(huán)境等作用，包括讀懂漫畫標題，說明性文字或人物語言。從中概括內(nèi)容，揭示主旨。單一畫面根據(jù)內(nèi)容找關(guān)系，即畫面內(nèi)部人與人、人與物、物與物之間的關(guān)系，找出它們之間的某種聯(lián)系，從中分析主旨，提煉中心。多幅畫面要做比較，看變化，把握事物的變化趨勢。寫作形式可以有記敘、說明、議論等方式，一定要審清題意，明確要求，選準角度。其中要注意通過聯(lián)想想象把漫畫內(nèi)容故事化、情節(jié)化，把畫面中的內(nèi)容與現(xiàn)實生活相結(jié)合。如側(cè)重說明，則要明確要素之間的方位關(guān)系，如上下、左右、內(nèi)外等，通過分析來概括主旨。往往漫畫的主旨就是作文的主旨。漫畫說明類文章：宜實，傳其形，重方位交代。漫畫描寫議論類文章：宜虛，傳其神，抓主旨，可以有想像。但要把握一點：分析畫面，