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【正文】 ittle brother goes to the park every Sunday There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. 時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題 1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet. 2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last. 3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last. 29th Olympic Games will hold in China. The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China. Chinglish 現(xiàn)象 1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake. 2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School. Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park. My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School. 行文的邏輯性問題 1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mother’s help. 2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into the river. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter. She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river. 詞類錯用 I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. 2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy. 典型病例 ? 名詞的單復數(shù)問題 ? 主謂一致問題 ? 時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題 ? Chinglish 現(xiàn)象 ? 行文的邏輯性問題 ? 詞類錯用 請你當老師 ?書面表達 ? 自行車在北京仍然受歡迎，騎車上學或上班都很方便。如今越來越多的人 …… 這使得 …… 。騎車既可以 …… ，又可以 …… 。那么你更喜歡哪種交通工具呢？為什么？ 請你當老師 Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike. Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them. Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike. 句子開頭要大寫，每句之后有標點； 前句句末用逗號，后句開頭用小寫； 前句句末用句號，后句開頭要大寫； 記住書寫須清楚，因為里面有分數(shù)； 先草稿，后定稿，書寫歌謠記牢靠。
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