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d Sentences By installing a birdbath,we gave the birds a source of water. After finishing the research,I found that the paper was easy to write.3.懸垂動(dòng)詞不定式(Dangling Infinitive)Dangling Modifiers To ski properly,a course of instruction is necessary. To write well,good books must be read.Revised SentencesTo ski properly,a beginner should take a course of instruction.To write well, I must read good books..4.懸垂省略從句(Dangling Elliptical Clause)Dangling Modifier While climbing the hill,the rain began to fall When only a small boy,my father took me with him to ChicagoRevised Sentences While climbing the hill,she felt the rain beginning to fall When I was only a small boy,my father took me with him to Chicago.常用的修改懸垂性修飾語的方法有: ,對(duì)所修飾的短語提供行為者(actor) (承擔(dān)動(dòng)作行為的人或物).Dangling Modifiers At the age of six my uncle bought my first pet,a goldfish. While leaving the house,the phone rang Using this drug,many undesirable side effects are experienced.Revised Sentences At the age of six, I received my first pet, a goldfish from my uncle. While leaving the house, I heard the phone ring Using this drug,patients experience many undesirable side effects.,擴(kuò)展其成為一個(gè)完整的 從句,由行為者做主語. Revised Sentences When I was six,my uncle bought me my first pet,a goldfish As I was leaving the house,the phone rang.Many undesirable side effects are experienced when this drug is used.Directions:Please revise the following sentences with dangling modifiers.1.Thumbing through the magazine,her eyes automatically noticed the cosmetic ads.2.To please the visitors,a cross talk was performed. 3.On entering the teacher’s office,a terrestrial globe caught his attention. ;4.Though only seventeen,the army accepted his application.5.From attending professional meetings,important lessons can be learned.6.With fifty pages left to read,War and Peace was absorbing.7.On the newsstands only an hour, its sales surprised everyone.8.While eating lunch in the cafeteria,the puter malfunctionedRevised sentences1.Her eyes automatically noticed the cosmetic ads as she was thumbingthrough the magazine.2.To please the visitors,they performed a cross talk。3. On entering the teacher’s office,he noticed a terrestrial globe.4. Though he was only seventeen,the army accepted his application.5. From attending professional meetings,we learned some importantlessons.6. With fifty pages left to read, Tina found War and Peace was absorbing.7. Because the magazine had been on the newsstands only an hour, its sales surprised everyone.8. While the programmer was eating lunch in the cafeteria,the puter malfunctioned.Directions:Here are sentences with dangling modifiers.Correctthem in two ways.Either place the subject within the opening wordgroup,or place it right after the opening word group. at the lake,a rock cut Maria’s foot. eating my sandwich,five mosquitoes bit me. out of bed,the tile floor was so cold that Sue shivered all over.4Although exhausted from operating, the day ended with reading lab reports.Revised sentences Maria was swimming at the lake,she cut her foot on a rock. OR:Swimming at the lake,Maria cut her foot on a rock.2.While I was eating my sandwich,five mosquitoes bit me. OR:While eating my sandwich,I was bitten by five mosquitoes.3.When Sue got out of bed,the tile floor was so cold that she shivered all over. OR:Getting out of bed,Sue found the tile floor so cold that she shivered a11 over.4. Although the doctor was exhausted from operating,he ended the day by reading lab reports.OR: Although exhausted from operating, the doctor ended the day by reading lab reports.