【正文】 分度標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差及格人數(shù)及格率最高分寫作題2511．325．4966033．7524（三）、答題情況分析從學(xué)生答題的情況看，學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力呈正態(tài)發(fā)展，提高明顯，雖然還存在一些有待改進(jìn)的問題。呈現(xiàn)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：（1）行文基本符合寫作要求。第三、四檔的文章都能突出主題，覆蓋提示要點(diǎn)，借用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、句型表達(dá)自己的思想，大部分學(xué)生能圍繞提示要點(diǎn)行文，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）文章連貫、自然、簡潔、準(zhǔn)確，優(yōu)美。第五檔的文章在突出主題，覆蓋提示要點(diǎn)的同時(shí)，詞語富有變化、銜接好、短語，句型結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜且準(zhǔn)確，篇章布局得體到位，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛之作用。在此選登一篇24分的優(yōu)秀作文.Dear Mark,I’m writing to express my appreciations for your participation in our activity yesterday.Your involvement led the activity to a great success and your performance of singing English songs impressed us a lot. What’s more, the discussion on “Culture difference between England and China” was exiting and fruitful. Some of the club members told me that they had improved their oral English 。others said that they had learned a lot about the English culture and custom through the discussion.I sincerely hope you enjoyed the afternoon with us. All of us benefited a lot from the activity, and we will appreciate it if you will join us again.Yours,Li Hua下面是一篇17分作文：Dear Mark,Thanks for your joining, and the activity was a success.Although the activity like this was often to be held before. The one we held yesterday was very successful. During the activity, many students talked to you happily . And if they had any questions you helped them to solve it. Do you know, you have set a portrait of friendly, heartwarming and clever among the students. And every student began to admire you deeply. After the activity the classmates of mine told me they have learned many skills about learning, reading and writing with your help. I was very happy to hear that. I think I am very lucky to know you.In a word, thank you very much. And I have a small with: I hope you can join us all the time.Love from,Li Hua 下面是一篇9分作文：Dear Mark,Thank you came our English active. I very happy. My friend. Thank you! You know, this active very successed. Our very happy, every feel very good, them learn from you some knowledge, and them like you, hope you often e take part in our English active. Because of you take part in our English active, you make active became full fun, let our became a like English people. Now some people think of take part in English club. I take proud of you, you gave our learn English confidence. Let our for English more and more interest. Everyone thank you!Mark, our hope you taking part in English active next. Hope you e! Thank you again!Yours,Li Hua存在的問題。抽樣表明第二、三檔的文章中學(xué)生人數(shù)增多，得分下滑。（1） 畫蛇添足。作自我介紹：I’m Li Hua. ....（2）、書寫不規(guī)范，卷面不整潔，可視性差。抽樣表明各檔次的文章中都存在書寫不規(guī)范，卷面不整潔，普遍得分低的問題。這部分學(xué)生沒有養(yǎng)成良好的書寫習(xí)慣，第一，字跡潦草難認(rèn)，這給閱卷帶來很大困難。應(yīng)引起考生及教師的特別重視。第二，書寫不規(guī)范。字母大小不勻稱，很不美觀；不按規(guī)則移行；不注意大小寫；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號因受漢語影響使用不當(dāng)，有的考生習(xí)慣性的每個(gè)單詞后都加一個(gè)句號或點(diǎn)上一點(diǎn)。整篇文章不分段。（3）、常見詞錯誤明顯。Thank...for寫成think...for。 taughtteached。 activityaction。 yesterdayyearstoday。 inviteinvent（4）、詞語搭配漢化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)、動詞時(shí)態(tài)及形式、邏輯思維、語言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性均有問題。語言結(jié)構(gòu)的表達(dá)形式,句子成分混亂。例如： about today? ’m writing to thank you for you e. we were invited you join our activity. was learned a lot through the activity. is worthy of to be studied. you think it? appear is thinked highly of by us.（5）、要點(diǎn)不齊全或不完整。（6）、不會靈活使用承上啟下的過渡性銜接詞，短語。 例如：To begin with, what’s more, in addition,...（7）、漢化翻譯突出，忽視動詞，時(shí)態(tài)，非謂語動詞的使用，缺乏地道表達(dá)。 I’m is like speak English. Let our bee a like English people. Please you attend the activity more times. We are all benefit from it.（8）.寫得多，但不搭邊，不靠題。（9）.發(fā)揮過多，收不住，錯誤多。（四）、今后教學(xué)建議，精益求精。高考將近，建議按考綱要求，分類總結(jié)，特別平日生活學(xué)習(xí)中常見話題類型，如應(yīng)用文（書信，通知，便條，海報(bào)，等），看圖作文，提綱作文，圖表描述等，是提高書面表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確性較行之有效的辦法。具體做法：（1）、強(qiáng)化系統(tǒng)訓(xùn)練。進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)化考綱訓(xùn)練內(nèi)容，同時(shí)偏重文章的謀篇布局，詞，短語，句子的選擇上多加斟酌，推敲，力求語言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明。（2）.運(yùn)用較復(fù)雜句子結(jié)構(gòu)，使用高級詞匯。，狀語從句，賓語從句，同位語從句，主語從句或表語從句。，如疑問句，祈使句，倒裝句，省略句。，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型和其它固定句型。（3）.確保訓(xùn)練時(shí)間，講究訓(xùn)練效果。每次習(xí)作控制在25 分鐘內(nèi)完成，并出示范文。（2）.注意卷面、拼寫、詞性、句型、分段、銜接、邏輯等。（3）、分類熟讀熟記經(jīng)典范文，準(zhǔn)確記住詞句，積累語言素材，形成語感，高考備用。（4）.強(qiáng)記范文中經(jīng)典句子，有備無患。（5）.迅速調(diào)整，擺脫復(fù)習(xí)疲憊期影響，銳意迎戰(zhàn)。B．關(guān)注寫作訓(xùn)練基本原則 。 。1．內(nèi)容無挑，卷面欠雅。2．誤解題意，離題甚遠(yuǎn)；3．語言簡單，句式單一。4. 胡編亂造，生搬用套。5．逐句翻譯，句不成文。6．偷天換日，蒙混過關(guān)。7．詞窮句殆，眾人皆知。，語篇結(jié)構(gòu)，使用高級詞匯和地道的表達(dá)。2．關(guān)注篇章布局時(shí)句子之間過渡與銜接。1).表因果關(guān)系的過渡性詞匯: as a result, thanks to, due to ,as a consequence of（結(jié)果）, in consequence of, consequently…2).表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡性詞匯：what’s more, what’s worse, to make the matter better, not to mention…3).表著名觀點(diǎn)的過渡性詞匯： as we all know, as is known to all,。， It is well understood/accepted that…4).表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的過渡性詞匯： as far as I’m concerned, in my opinion/view/judgment, from a different viewpoint…5).表并列關(guān)系的過渡性詞匯：in the meanwhile（同時(shí)）, in addition, apart from that…6). 表轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡性詞匯： however，nevertheless, while, whereas（然而）, on the contrary,7). 表順序的過渡性詞匯： first…second…then, finally/at last/in the end。 firstly… secondly… thirdly…8).表普遍規(guī)律的過渡性詞匯： generally speaking, in general, all in all…9). 表總結(jié)的過渡性詞匯： in one word, altogether, as a whole, in conclusion（總之）…10). 表特定心情的過渡性詞匯： to one’s surprise, to one’s joy/delight, to one’s disappointment, to one’s satisfaction, to one’s pride…3．寫作句型歸類1)．書信寫作句型：a. Thanks so much for your letter, which arrived…b. It is a pleasure for me to invite you…on behalf of…c. I’m writing to you with reference to…d. I would be grateful if you could…e. I would appreciate if you could…f. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.2).用于結(jié)尾句型： a. From what has discussed/mentioned above, we may conclude that…b. It is high time something was done about…c. Taking into account all these factors（鑒于以上因素）, we may reach the conclusion that…d. It is essential that effective measures be taken to…e. In conclusion, the most important is…f. Judging by the figures/statistics, it is not difficult to see that…3).用于陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)句型：a. My own experience tells me that…b. In my opinion we should attack more importance to…c. Personally, I prefer... d. In my view, both sides are partly right in that...e. But for me, I would rather...4).句首提出論點(diǎn)句型：a. Recently,...has bee the focus of the society.b. ...has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily lif