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children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I’ll study harder and try my best to realize my dream. 第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)(滿分 25分) 最近,學(xué)校以高考臨近學(xué)習(xí)緊張為名,擬取消高三體育課,引發(fā)了同學(xué)們的不滿。假如 10 你是高三( 1)班班長李華,代表全班同學(xué)給校長寫一封信,反對取消體育課。具體要求如下: 主要內(nèi)容:理由;要求和建議; 詞數(shù)要求: 100 左右; 開頭已給出,不計入總詞匯。 Dear principal, I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, Senior 3... ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 平頂山許昌新鄉(xiāng)三市 2020 屆高三第三次調(diào)研考試 高三英語參考答案及評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 1—5 BBCAC 6—10 CACCB 11—15 ACACB 16—20 BABCA 21—25 ACCAC 26—30 BBBDA 31—35 DBDCD 36—40 CABDA 41—45 CDCAB 46—50 DBADC 51—55 BCBCA 56—60 CDAAA 61—65 CCBAD 66—70 BABCB 71—75 CFBDG 1— 20小題每小題 ,共 30分; 21— 35小題每小題 1分,共 15分; 36— 55小題每小題 ,共 30分; 56— 75小題每小題 2分,共 40 分; 11 短文改錯 My dream is to bee a school teacher in the future. In fact, I ?had the dream of being have a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. progress There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do that children’s teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. to Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is Compared harder But to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I’ll study harder and try my So best to realize my dream. 書面表達(dá) One possible version Dear principal, I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, senior Grade 3. I am writing to report us students’ opinions on our PE classes being cancelled. Facing the ing college entrance examination, we Grade 3 students all feel stressful. One of the effective means of reducing our pressure is taking exercise including having PE classes. That is why my classmates felt frustrated and helpless when hearing your decision. We believe taking exercise can keep us more healthy, more energetic to improve our grade. It can also strengthen our friendship and we can do less for more when learning. As the saying goes: all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Considering all the above, we sincerely hope that you do not cancel our PE classes therefore. By the way, having one more PE class each week is wele. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua 評分原則 ( 1)本題總分為 25分,按 5 個檔次給分。 ( 2)評分時先根據(jù)內(nèi)容和語言確定所屬檔次,然后根據(jù)要求調(diào)整最后給分。 ( 3)詞數(shù)少于 90 或多于 130 的,從總分中減去 2 分。 ( 4)評分時,應(yīng)注意的重要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性 。 ( 5)拼寫與標(biāo)點符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個方面。評分時應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫 及詞匯用法均可接受。 ( 6)如書寫 較差以致影響交際,將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。 內(nèi)容要點參看提示部分。 各檔次給分范圍及要求(見下表) 。 12 檔次 分?jǐn)?shù) 內(nèi)容要點 詞匯運用及語法結(jié)構(gòu)運用 表 達(dá) 上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性 五(最好) 2125 覆蓋所有要點,應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。 有些語言錯誤,但因盡力使用較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致。 具備較強(qiáng)的語言應(yīng)用能力,有效地使用了語句間的連接成分。全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 四(好) 1620 雖漏掉 1— 2 個次重點但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。語法結(jié) 構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確些許錯誤主要是嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。 應(yīng)用簡單語句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫。 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 三(適當(dāng)) 1115 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋主要內(nèi)容。 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)要求。有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。 應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容 連貫 ?;就瓿闪嗽囶}規(guī)定的任務(wù)。整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 二(較差) 610 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào), 詞匯知識有限。有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤,影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。 較少使用語句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫性, 未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。 一(差) 15 明顯 遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào),詞匯知識有限。較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。 缺乏語句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫, 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。 判斷文章檔次時,要注意要點;更要注意按照詞匯及語法結(jié)構(gòu)運用及表達(dá)方法總體評價文章。 內(nèi)容 要點可用不同方式表達(dá),對緊扣主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不扣分,開頭和結(jié)尾的內(nèi)容須合乎邏輯,語言得體。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯誤主要指以下幾種:主謂不一致,動詞形式(句子時態(tài)和語態(tài))不對,詞組搭配 不當(dāng)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤、詞序不當(dāng)、關(guān)鍵詞用錯。