【正文】 if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（全國(guó)中考模擬）每位同學(xué)都希望成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫(xiě)一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龅?。?duì)待集體積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng), 注重細(xì)節(jié),工作高標(biāo)準(zhǔn),……對(duì)待他人尊重老師、與同學(xué)相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對(duì)待自己嚴(yán)于律已，努力學(xué)習(xí)，不輕易放棄，謙虛有禮……要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2．所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。be popular with sb受某人歡迎；take an active part in積極參加；keep secrets保守秘密； give up easily. 輕易放棄；17．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開(kāi)了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，互相幫助個(gè)人旅游◆自由安排時(shí)間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travel with a group 個(gè)人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談?wù)勛约簩?duì)不同的旅游方式的看法。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。18．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)生活中總有一些事情讓人覺(jué)得無(wú)奈，被人誤解、考試失利、遭遇逆境等。請(qǐng)以“There is always hope ”為題，寫(xiě)一篇你的親身經(jīng)歷及感受。 What’s your feeling? What did you learn from it?提示：①詞數(shù)不少于70詞 ②可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)使行文更加流暢 ③文中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)的姓名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】There is always hopeAs middle school students, we have all taken many examinations and experienced failure as well as success. Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams.Some of us bee low in spirits in the face of failure. Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies. As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on.Fortunately, I got the helps of my teachers. They spared no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure and encouraged me to bee more confident so that I won’t repeat the mistakes in my later examinations.I believe there is always hope. So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如as middle school students，as well as，in the exams，some of，low in spirits，want to do，make further efforts，as a result，go on，spare no effort to do，so that，so long as，find out，make great progress，turn into等。Worse still, some students are s