【正文】 if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。16．（全國中考模擬）每位同學都希望成為班級中受歡迎的人。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文,談談你是如何做的。對待集體積極參加各項活動, 注重細節(jié),工作高標準,……對待他人尊重老師、與同學相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對待自己嚴于律已，努力學習，不輕易放棄，謙虛有禮……要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3．不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。be popular with sb受某人歡迎；take an active part in積極參加；keep secrets保守秘密； give up easily. 輕易放棄；17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達在英語課上，同學們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報討論結(jié)果，并談談自己的想法。團隊旅游◆有導游，不會迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識朋友，互相幫助個人旅游◆自由安排時間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點；◆學會照顧自己你的想法……注意事項：1．文章必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團隊旅游travel with a group 個人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談談自己對不同的旅游方式的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。18．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達生活中總有一些事情讓人覺得無奈，被人誤解、考試失利、遭遇逆境等。請以“There is always hope ”為題，寫一篇你的親身經(jīng)歷及感受。 What’s your feeling? What did you learn from it?提示：①詞數(shù)不少于70詞 ②可適當添加細節(jié)使行文更加流暢 ③文中請勿提及真實的姓名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】There is always hopeAs middle school students, we have all taken many examinations and experienced failure as well as success. Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams.Some of us bee low in spirits in the face of failure. Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies. As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on.Fortunately, I got the helps of my teachers. They spared no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure and encouraged me to bee more confident so that I won’t repeat the mistakes in my later examinations.I believe there is always hope. So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如as middle school students，as well as，in the exams，some of，low in spirits，want to do，make further efforts，as a result，go on，spare no effort to do，so that，so long as，find out，make great progress，turn into等。Worse still, some students are s