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an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】:本文是一篇話題作文,要求就“Snowplow Parents(掃雪機(jī)式父母)” 這一話題展開(kāi)討論,并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點(diǎn),結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法。在解答寫(xiě)作這類(lèi)試題時(shí),要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下,形成提綱,然后再動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。: 本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng),輔以第一人稱(chēng)。文章首先說(shuō)明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因,接下來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn),并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。:短語(yǔ):in one39。s lives,in this case,in this way,in trouble。句型:高分句型一:Inthiscase,theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily.Inthiscase在這樣的情況下;這句話意為:在這樣的情況下,他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二:they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩,這句話意為:當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時(shí)他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問(wèn)題。9.李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō), 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華, 請(qǐng)你給Jessica寫(xiě)一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn):1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間;2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式:全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等;3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。要求:〔開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。Dear Jessica, I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作是以書(shū)信的方式向筆友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié),要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。全文可分兩大部分,第一部分寫(xiě)中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式,第二部分寫(xiě)我最期待的活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如get together,enjoy the full moon, share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。10.現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)(smartphone)越來(lái)越普及,很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。提示:在生活中你用智能手機(jī)做什么?智能手機(jī)對(duì)你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響?你對(duì)中學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)有什么看法?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)主要用第一、第三人稱(chēng)。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。