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性強,長短句結(jié)合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。學(xué)會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學(xué)會微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。有益于身心健康。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。參考詞匯: 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。寫作時要注意遣詞造句,不能受漢語的影響,要用地道的英語表達(dá),注意時態(tài),語態(tài),單詞拼寫,語法等問題,用好簡單句,適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請結(jié)合自己的實際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名?!敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細(xì),寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,不能逐字翻譯。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練文中運用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章條理分明,三個要點提示都已表達(dá)清楚,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。句型:被動句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,主語從句。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。假如你是李華,請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點提示,并結(jié)合你的家庭實際情況,給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信,向他介紹一下你的家規(guī),并向他展示一個溫情智慧的中國家庭。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在