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from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí),并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等,增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫?!军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點 寫一封信,說說你的計劃。活動畢業(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點地點學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講;2.互贈禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語法正確,書寫整潔。 ,開頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計劃。【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。10.書面表達(dá)為感受母愛情深,弘揚知恩圖報,某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以MyMother為主題的征文活動,請根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖所提供的信息,寫一篇短文,介紹你的母親和你之間的故事。參考詞匯:givemuchto…,It39。smyturnto…,trymybestto…提示:1)短文內(nèi)容須包括所給內(nèi)容,含母親曾為你所做的事和你將為母親所做的事各一件,并闡述原因;2)請注意短文結(jié)構(gòu)層次、時態(tài)運用和卷面整潔度;3)詞數(shù)80個左右,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4)文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個人的相關(guān)信息。MyMotherWeneedlove.Wealsoneedtoshowlove.ThepersonIlovemostismymother.___.【答案】My motherWe need love.We also need toshow love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn39。t have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.That39。s what she wants most,I think.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛情深,弘揚知恩圖報,要求以MyMother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事,參加某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動。在寫作時,注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài);注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩?!军c睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。