【正文】 待的活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。9．書面表達(dá)4月28日，國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國(guó)北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開(kāi)幕式，提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”（fivepoint initiative on green development），為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國(guó)智慧。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”（Live Green, Live Better）? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）, 為?？庇⒄Z(yǔ)角”寫一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然，如：綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然，如：讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與，從身邊小事做起，如：適度節(jié)約，拒絕浪費(fèi)……；做到人與自然的和諧。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句：It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，make full use of充分利用， let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來(lái)10．同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來(lái)！請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計(jì)劃，可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。 寫作內(nèi)容：，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。，幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開(kāi)頭部分已給出，但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動(dòng)。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過(guò)度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。