【正文】 章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話(huà)題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。9．題目②“持之以恒，方得始。”堅(jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛(ài)好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語(yǔ)：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問(wèn)題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫(xiě)明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺??！驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q(chēng)寫(xiě)初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫(xiě)“What did you do?用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描寫(xiě)How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要緊扣主題，文句通順?！芭懿健保牟糠衷敿?xì)地描寫(xiě)了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過(guò)克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語(yǔ)從句so…that …；比較級(jí)do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語(yǔ)多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”10．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。最近他對(duì)母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫(xiě)信想了解該詩(shī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。【詳解】根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)文章。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：交代寫(xiě)信目的——朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題，可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。