【正文】 he World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)承接短文開(kāi)頭，寫(xiě)出對(duì)學(xué)生的倡議。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是一段式，寫(xiě)的是閱讀的好處，時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述倡議時(shí)，描寫(xiě)細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。10．俗話說(shuō)，國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況，給你的英國(guó)筆友Sam寫(xiě)一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國(guó)家庭。要點(diǎn)提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛(ài)幼，禮貌待人誠(chéng)實(shí)守信，不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息，杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫(xiě)作要求:，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；；。文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。