【正文】 。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。構思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。文章的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下表格內的要點提示，并結合你的家庭實際情況，給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個溫情智慧的中國家庭。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，寫的是閱讀的好處，時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述倡議時，描寫細致，條理清晰。內容包括：應該讀什么樣的書，以及讀書的意義。9．4月23日是“世界讀書日”，你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書，讀好書”的活動?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而I think it39。conditions）差5生活越來越好，環(huán)境（environment）越來越舒適．6你的感想…（寫兩到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown． 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z角”投稿,內容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個） 3. 應對霧霾的措施（3個）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。6．　　近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。（4）詞數(shù):不少于80。（2）開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Ki