【正文】 。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get good results, spend+時(shí)間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。他們說（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。（舉例說明，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。10．你是一位九年級(jí)的學(xué)生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對(duì)你關(guān)心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語從句。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對(duì)他的生活的意義。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用，靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語和句型。like __________________________．【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。the Offromyouit/them？3．Whatyoulike？2．Whycourse（s）do這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。 商品 goods。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。8．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。7． 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達(dá)了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W(xué)生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動(dòng)舉辦的具體時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)安排以及你的建議。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的變化。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建