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。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動筆寫作。提示:在生活中你用智能手機(jī)做什么?智能手機(jī)對你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響?你對中學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)有什么看法?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇英語短文,談一談你對智能手機(jī)的看法。10.現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)(smartphone)越來越普及,很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。寫作時,避免漢語式英語。時態(tài)為一般過去時,靈活運(yùn)用動詞的過去式?!敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”。內(nèi)容提示:1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。9.為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個選題。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確,用詞得體。這一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等詞,敘述條理、有層次;最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有信息。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文章意思連貫,表達(dá)流暢。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主,簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同,不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。通過審題可知,這是要求寫一封建議信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面:首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個交流,然后引出寫信的目的;接下來給出具體的建議,依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條,用正確的英語表達(dá)出來,還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容,使文章更加充實(shí);最后寫一個適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾,如希望建議對你有幫助等。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。Dear Sam ,I39。注意 :。、報紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關(guān)報道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongc