【正文】 得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。要求從個人外貌特點、與人溝通及學習壓力等方面進行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作亮點：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談談我的煩惱及怎樣處理他們；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學習上的壓力幾方面分別談論自己的煩惱及處理的方式，生動具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補、作定語、作賓語用得準確恰當；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動?！究键c定位】 考查提綱類作文。10．你是一位九年級的學生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對你關心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。你認為自己學習上還要多花工夫。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴格要求，但是也很關心你。（舉例說明，適當發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。他們說（適當發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當發(fā)揮。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。