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篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫;書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析:短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃,文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫,不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫,主要使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語語法,不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:e to an end結(jié)束;on the way在途中;get close to nature親近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事;take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等,句子過度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句,增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)??键c(diǎn):考查提綱作文。10.書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計(jì)劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫一封信,說說你的計(jì)劃?;顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講;2.互贈禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語法正確,書寫整潔。 ,開頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計(jì)劃。【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。