【正文】 整，避免漢語式英語，敘述條理清晰。：高分短語：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。9．李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華, 請你給Jessica寫一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點：1. 中秋節(jié)的時間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動。要求：〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)）；, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。Dear Jessica, I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。10．為了吸引外國游客，杭州旅游網(wǎng)希望對杭州茶文化進(jìn)行宣傳。請你根據(jù)表格信息，用英語為其寫一篇介紹，詞數(shù)80左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類介紹型作文，所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。亮點詞匯短語：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea綠茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth對…嚴(yán)格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不僅．．．而且．．．。亮點句型：It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好處。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對某人來說）做某事是怎樣的。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國著名的茶葉，它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關(guān)，而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關(guān)。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語從句。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。Where引導(dǎo)的定語從句。