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給提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲;感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助;祝愿,在寫作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,語(yǔ)句通順,符合邏輯,符合發(fā)言稿的格式,沒有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。9. 假如你是李華,你的英國(guó)筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達(dá)了想?yún)⒓幽阈J钇跒橥鈬?guó)學(xué)生舉辦的漢語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)的愿望,希望你告知活動(dòng)舉辦的具體時(shí)間地點(diǎn),活動(dòng)安排以及你的建議。提示詞語(yǔ): Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外,還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。文章條理分明,三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:短語(yǔ):as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。句型:被動(dòng)句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ),主語(yǔ)從句。10.現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)(smartphone)越來(lái)越普及,很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。提示:在生活中你用智能手機(jī)做什么?智能手機(jī)對(duì)你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響?你對(duì)中學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)有什么看法?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。