【正文】 ______________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）” 這一話題展開討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點，結合此觀點闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動筆寫作。： 本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點，并闡述自己觀點的原因。：短語：in one39。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily．Inthiscase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認為孩子會更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩，這句話意為：當他們陷入麻煩時他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問題。10．你是一位九年級的學生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對你關心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。你認為自己學習上還要多花工夫。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴格要求，但是也很關心你。（舉例說明，適當發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。他們說（適當發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當發(fā)揮。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個左右，郵件開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。