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is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。主要說明要有自己的目標,努力實現(xiàn)目標應做到勤奮學習,使自己不斷強大;正確面對困難,積極參加社會活動。:例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內(nèi)容;時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主,主要講述如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標(Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…)。承接文章開頭,句意完整,避免漢語式英語,敘述條理清晰。:高分短語:feel satisfied;feel upset;e true;set a practical goal;both…and…;keep patient。高分句型:It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.;there be句型;祈使句;need to do sth.。9.書面表達 我校決定讓學生輪流打掃廁所,以此作為教育學生的一種方式。 這件事在學生中引 起了強烈的反響,請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料,報告給學校。 同意 :1.多數(shù)學生是獨生子女,不會做事。 2.學生應該學會做艱苦的工作。 3.學會理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學生生病。 2.不是學生應該做的事情。 3.打掃教室就足夠了。 注意:1.短文應包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯; 2.不少于80詞。 生詞提示:respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。重點詞匯及短語:argument爭論;take place發(fā)生;among(三者或三者以上)之間;a good chance for sb對某人來說是個好機會;help sb do sth幫助某人做某事;get sick生病。亮點句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學校讓學生做自愿勞動以來,在學生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論?,F(xiàn)在完成時(have/has+done)。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務勞動是他們學習如何做困難工作的好機會。動詞不定式作主語,謂語動詞用單數(shù),疑問詞+to do。10.書面表達?!癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些同學(結果見下表)。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論,并闡述你的觀點。同學主要觀點你的觀點努力學習尊重父母服務社會計劃未來……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當增加細節(jié);(2)你的觀點至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學參與討論,寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點,所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時,敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱,敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點,所寫的句子應該符合英語語法,不能是漢語式的句子,要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點:短文用了一些短語和句式,如:do a survey about sth關于某事做調查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子??键c:材料作文。