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is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。主要說明要有自己的目標(biāo),努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí),使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;正確面對(duì)困難,積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。:例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內(nèi)容;時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)(Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…)。承接文章開頭,句意完整,避免漢語式英語,敘述條理清晰。:高分短語:feel satisfied;feel upset;e true;set a practical goal;both…and…;keep patient。高分句型:It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.;there be句型;祈使句;need to do sth.。9.書面表達(dá) 我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所,以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響,請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料,報(bào)告給學(xué)校。 同意 :1.多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨(dú)生子女,不會(huì)做事。 2.學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做艱苦的工作。 3.學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學(xué)生生病。 2.不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。 3.打掃教室就足夠了。 注意:1.短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯; 2.不少于80詞。 生詞提示:respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語:argument爭(zhēng)論;take place發(fā)生;among(三者或三者以上)之間;a good chance for sb對(duì)某人來說是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì);help sb do sth幫助某人做某事;get sick生病。亮點(diǎn)句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來,在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論。現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)(have/has+done)。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。動(dòng)詞不定式作主語,謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù),疑問詞+to do。10.書面表達(dá)?!癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)(結(jié)果見下表)。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論,并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn),所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱,敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法,不能是漢語式的句子,要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。考點(diǎn):材料作文。