【正文】 _______________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。主要說(shuō)明要有自己的目標(biāo)，努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，使自己不斷強(qiáng)大；正確面對(duì)困難，積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。：例文用第一人稱來(lái)敘述主要內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章開(kāi)頭，句意完整，避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，敘述條理清晰。：高分短語(yǔ)：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。9．書(shū)面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫(xiě)一封信，說(shuō)說(shuō)你的計(jì)劃?；顒?dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長(zhǎng)作演講；2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。 ，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔。 ，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。10．書(shū)面表達(dá)為感受母愛(ài)情深，弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào)，某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以MyMother為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你的母親和你之間的故事。參考詞匯：givemuchto…，It39。smyturnto…，trymybestto…提示：1）短文內(nèi)容須包括所給內(nèi)容，含母親曾為你所做的事和你將為母親所做的事各一件，并闡述原因；2）請(qǐng)注意短文結(jié)構(gòu)層次、時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用和卷面整潔度；3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4）文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個(gè)人的相關(guān)信息。MyMotherWeneedlove．Wealsoneedtoshowlove．ThepersonIlovemostismymother．___．【答案】My motherWe need love．We also need toshow love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。t have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That39。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛(ài)情深，弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào)，要求以MyMother為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。