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語從句、狀語從句等。學(xué)校開展了“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng),假如你是張明,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提供的要點(diǎn),以“I39。m a Dream Teenagers great honor for me to make a speech here. As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn):1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間;2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式:全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等;3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié),要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。9.書面表達(dá)4月28日,國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國(guó)北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國(guó)智慧。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。 寫作內(nèi)容:,享受大自然的美景,放松心情。 寫作要求: 詞左右,開頭部分已給出,但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。m sure I39。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:e to an end結(jié)束;on the way在途中;get close to nature親近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事;take part in sth參加活動(dòng)。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句,增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫,主要使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費(fèi)……;做到人與自然的和諧。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如get together,enjoy the full moon, share our stories等。Dear Jessica, I39。8.李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。(可聯(lián)系實(shí)際,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。但為提升作文檔次,應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句,或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),如非謂語動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語態(tài)等。題目中只給出了大概的提綱,其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補(bǔ)充,并用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.就此問題,老師要求你在英語課上做一個(gè)以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報(bào)告,談?wù)勀愕淖龇?,與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。用詞準(zhǔn)確,語言得體,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過自己的人。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手,寫完整的句子。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問題為提綱,發(fā)揮想象力,充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息,組織語言,連貫成文?!敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。5. “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵(lì);鼓舞;賦予靈感;或啟發(fā)思考”等。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。d like to do,help me ope