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句的結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫14.(四川中考模擬) 書面表達(dá)本周你們班召開了一次主題班會(huì)“畢業(yè)前,我能為學(xué)校做些什么?”大家踴躍發(fā)言,作為第三小組成員,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)各小組的情況匯報(bào)以及你們小組的討論情況,寫一個(gè)總結(jié)交給老師。第一小組把我們用過的書本和學(xué)習(xí)用品贈(zèng)送給七年級(jí)、八年級(jí)的弟弟妹妹, 尤其是家庭貧困的同學(xué)。第二小組籌錢,為學(xué)校圖書館購買書籍。第三小組......提示詞: 贈(zèng)送 present 用過的 used注意:1. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞;2. 補(bǔ)充好本小組討論情況;3. 要點(diǎn)完整,層次清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地名、校名等。What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.【答案】What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫出一個(gè)班會(huì)會(huì)后的總結(jié)?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇材料作文。表格中一個(gè)兩個(gè)組的討論結(jié)果,第三組是需要考生圍繞著主題自己補(bǔ)充的,盡量避免與前面兩組重復(fù)。我們可以按照總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)來寫。 首先引出此次班會(huì)的主題;其次分別寫出三個(gè)小組的討論結(jié)果;最后可以對(duì)三個(gè)小組進(jìn)行總結(jié),表達(dá)情感。在語言上要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。15.(黑龍江中考模擬)書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華,你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息,給Billy回封電子郵件,并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。寫作要點(diǎn):1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試(physical test)做準(zhǔn)備。2. 介紹你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況:(1)每天鍛煉的時(shí)間:不到一個(gè)半小時(shí)。(2)偶爾不鍛煉的原因:作業(yè)多,沒時(shí)間。(3)擅長的體育運(yùn)動(dòng):球類運(yùn)動(dòng)。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來了哪些好處。寫作要求:1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫。3. 字跡工整,語言精練,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,給Billy回封電子郵件,介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況,并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I am busy……,because I have……,Doing exercise can help……,So I advise you to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信,接下來介紹我平時(shí)的鍛煉情況,最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16.(北京中考模擬)現(xiàn)在,某英文報(bào)紙正在開展以"遇見美"為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談一談生活中你遇見美的一次經(jīng)歷,主要內(nèi)容包括你什么時(shí)候在哪里遇見了美,經(jīng)歷了什么事情以及你為什么覺得它美。提示詞語:visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory提示問題:1. When and where did it happen?2. What did you experience?3. Why was it beautiful?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.【解析】試題分析:本文以"遇見美"為主題的短文,談?wù)勆钪杏鲆娒赖囊淮谓?jīng)歷,所以句子的主語是第一人稱單數(shù),句子的謂語動(dòng)詞用一般過去時(shí),要注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),要注意上下文的銜接,用自己熟悉的短語和句式。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:in front of sb在某人面前;give ;用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句,如:The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句,如:As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。17.(海南中考模擬)書面表達(dá)年1月以來,瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車,你對(duì)這一舉措有什么看法?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,談?wù)劰蚕韱诬嚨睦准笆褂霉蚕韱诬嚨慕ㄗh,以便在英語課上與同學(xué)們交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home要求:1. 語句通順,意思連貫,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范;2. 必須包含所給提示,但不要逐字翻譯,并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名;4. 詞數(shù)80左右。(文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think …