【正文】 Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運(yùn)動方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者?！驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q，談?wù)勛约簩δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運(yùn)動方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識以及結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勗鯓訌纳磉呅∈伦銎穑錾鷳B(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者；陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。開篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運(yùn)動是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運(yùn)動方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。：高分短語： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書寫時要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊——成長記錄袋時還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答卷。請以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你過去三年中難忘的校園生活，并描述自己對將來學(xué)習(xí)生活的期望。文章應(yīng)包括以下要點：過去三年校園生活所得，真的很感激老師的幫助。，互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助。，盡自己最大的努力幫助有需要的人。4…….（補(bǔ)充12點所得）過去三年校園生活所失。3. ……（補(bǔ)充12點所失）今后的學(xué)習(xí)打算……（12句話描述自己未來的打算）要求：① 詞數(shù)100左右；② 短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；③ 文中需包括所有寫作要點，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過渡詞句，使短文通順、連貫；④ 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：語言規(guī)范，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，書寫工整。My Unforgettable School LifeHow time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better.【解析】1. 接著正文寫下來，將所給要點翻譯出來，分三部分來寫，寫出“三年所得、三年所失、未來的打算。2. 先翻譯關(guān)鍵詞再來組句。在過去In the past，學(xué)到了很多知識learn a lot of knowledge, 對某人感激be grateful to sb, 對我們的老師感激be grateful to our teachers，和同學(xué)相處得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助help each other and learn from each students, 盡自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上學(xué)遲到be late for school不太愛好體育運(yùn)動I am not good at sports，在未來In the future…，簡要寫出自己對未來的規(guī)劃。3. 由于前面所提三年所得、三年所失皆為過去，所以時態(tài)上要用一般過去式，最后一項對將來的規(guī)劃，用一般將來時。4. 最后一項對未來的規(guī)劃，既是對所得所失的理解，也是對未來的展望。5. 寫句子時要注意人稱和數(shù)要一致。12．（江蘇泰州中學(xué)附屬初中中考模擬）請根據(jù)下表中的信息用英文介紹你的好友Lily。要求條理清楚，語句通順，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)100字左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。外貌 圓臉，笑瞇瞇的大眼睛；比我矮一點；帶著小圓眼鏡，讓她看上去很機(jī)靈。特點1. 禮貌的女孩，誠實；我信任她，真正的朋友，因為……。當(dāng)我憂傷時，她總是關(guān)心我，而且仔細(xì)傾聽我的問題，……。2．有幽默感，擅長講滑稽的笑話；和她在一起，我很少感到……。3. 喜歡DIY，……3．愿意和別人分享東西，幫助人時總有耐心，長大后……。 I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.【答案】My good friendI would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her.She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。13．（天津中考模擬）你馬上就要初中畢業(yè)了，恩師難忘，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，向大家介紹你的一位老師（Ms Wang）。（1） Ms Wang的基本情況：學(xué)科、年齡、外貌；（以上內(nèi)容自擬）（2） 老師的特點：嚴(yán)格，與學(xué)生相處融洽，和善，耐心，有創(chuàng)造性；（3） 你對老師的評價。參考詞匯：對某人嚴(yán)格的 be strict with sb. 創(chuàng)造性的 be creative要求：（1） 詞數(shù)：80?100個。（2） 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3） 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my ________ teacher, Ms Wang with you.【答案】I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生介紹自己最喜歡的老師。【詳解】這篇寫作考查考生對人物的描寫。對人物的描寫主要從基本信息、外貌、性格特征以及對其評價四個方面入手。考生結(jié)合著四個方面及所給信息，要做到信息全面，行文連貫。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子，并注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫腿ケ磉_(dá)，變化單詞的正確形式。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個并列句或復(fù)合