【正文】 的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。 translate into 把翻譯成；in order to為了； used to do過去常常做某事15．（海南中考模擬）書面表達年1月以來，瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車，你對這一舉措有什么看法？請根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，談談共享單車的利弊及使用共享單車的建議，以便在英語課上與同學們交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右。（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think … What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達隨著網(wǎng)絡的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學習模式受到?jīng)_擊?！熬W(wǎng)上學習（online learning）”這一新的學習模式備受青睞。假設你是陳欣，最近某英文雜志正在討論中學生是否應該通過網(wǎng)絡進行在線學習。以下是你所在班級的討論情況，請你給該報投稿，反映討論結果并談談你自己的想法。提示：觀點贊成反對理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源（resource）豐富2. 可以自由（freedom）選擇學習內(nèi)容和時間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多，有些不真實2. 長時間用電腦對眼睛不好要求：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，稿件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當發(fā)揮。向子結構準確，要點齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結構連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“網(wǎng)上學習（online learning）”為話題，結合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學習的兩種不同的觀點。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語從句、讓步狀語從句、動名詞作主語等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學習。17．（四川中考模擬）近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關注。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個） 3. 應對霧霾的措施（3個）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】In recent years, many citie