【文章內容簡介】 條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Hi, Asking,I’m the editor of WARM HEART. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對某位同學考前焦慮進行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級，the+比較級，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語放句首，用半倒裝。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（靖江市第三中學中考模擬） 年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會，會上我市正式啟動了“泰有禮”全民主題實踐活動，形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風尚和城市標識，同時組織“泰有禮”志愿服務隊伍，圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網”等文明實踐活動，承擔起對市民日常行為進行勸導的責任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者，請根據以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語短文。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（以上背景內容無需表達） 內容提示： ，幫助他們做家務活；，排隊候車，不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾；不在公共場所抽煙、喧嘩（比如在圖書館或博物館），不撒謊，不說臟話；，幫助別人；坐車時請讓座給老人，殘疾人，尤其抱小孩的婦女；，做到紅燈停，綠燈行；。 要求：，字跡工整：可圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮；、校名、地名成其他真實信息；As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。根據內容提示，至少包括五個點：we should respect our parents at home。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。We should never spit or litter everywhere。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。Don39。t forget to protect our environment補充作者個人觀點。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結全文，表達每個人都出一份力，我們的城市會越來越美。文中針對現(xiàn)象提出想法，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，且用第一人稱陳述。【點睛】10．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達我們在生活中總是面對著各種各樣的壓力，這會嚴重妨礙我們的學習和生活。某中學生英文報正開辟專欄討論中學生如何減壓。假設你叫李華，請從以下幾個方面，用英語寫出你的具體做法，向該欄目投稿。；；；。參考詞匯：stressed 注意：；；，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax for I feel stressed,I usually municate with my friends,parents or I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,39。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團委正在開展“學雷鋒、講文明、樹新風”的活動，作為一名中學生，我們平時應該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請根據下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導低碳騎自行車或步行上學，注意節(jié)約……保護環(huán)境愛護花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說“謝謝”、“ 對不起”、“ 請”等禮貌語言……幫助他人助人為樂，積極參加志愿者活動……要求： 。，自由發(fā)揮的內容必須圍繞主題。、校名、地名等相關信息。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First, we should choose to live a lowcarbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________.Third,________________