【正文】 play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問題，接下來介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認(rèn)為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。此處e into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：根據(jù)漢語提示和要求寫一篇短文。（A和B兩篇，可任選一篇）現(xiàn)在有許多新的購物方式，網(wǎng)上購物就是其中的一種。越來越多的人熟悉和喜歡網(wǎng)購，但是網(wǎng)購有利有弊，請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語以“Online shopping”為題寫一篇短文，描述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。?yōu)點(diǎn)：可以在任何時(shí)候購物；只需要一臺電腦和鼠標(biāo)；方便比較同類產(chǎn)品的價(jià)格，可以省錢；無論何時(shí)何地都可以收到所購物品。缺點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)上付款有時(shí)不安全；看不到實(shí)物，也不能試穿衣服。注意：語意連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確；詞數(shù)80－100。字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮縊nline shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a puter and mouse. Third, you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的利與弊。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。16．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Writing.In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?Now please write a passage of about 80120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.【答案】First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, twochild policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。17．（湖南中考模擬）暑假即將來臨，許多學(xué)生喜歡下河游泳。為預(yù)防游泳溺水事故的發(fā)生，你們班將舉行以“珍愛生命，預(yù)防溺水”為主題的班會。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓Π踩斡镜慕ㄗh。建議內(nèi)容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允許擅自結(jié)伴游泳；不會游泳，不要下水救人……要求：1．語言通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。2．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。4．詞數(shù)：70詞左右。參考詞匯：alone without permission（未經(jīng)許可） allowask for help cherish（珍愛）Going Swimming Safely 【答案】Summer vacation is ing. Many students like going swimming in rivers or lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. We shouldn’t go swimming alone. We can’t swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to swim without a parent. If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.We live only once，we must cherish life.【解析】這是一篇談?wù)勀銓Π踩斡镜慕ㄗh。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。18．（北京中考模擬）作為初三畢業(yè)生，你們首次參加了“英語聽說機(jī)考”（the English Listening and Speaking Online Test）。你應(yīng)邀為初一初二的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們做聽說機(jī)考的經(jīng)驗(yàn)介紹。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓τ⒄Z聽說機(jī)考有什么認(rèn)識，在考試中需要做什么以及你想對他們提出哪些建議。提示詞語：necessary, answer questions, take notes, retell, read a passage aloud提示問題： What do you think of theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test? What do they need to do in the test?What suggestions do you want to give them?Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something about theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test with you.Thanks for listening!【答案】Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe Eng