【正文】 ike him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫信，介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is……，He teaches us how to……，Mr. Green sets a good example for……，I hope to be……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我日常生活中的榜樣是格林先生，接下來(lái)介紹為什么格林先生是我的榜樣，最后我希望長(zhǎng)大后像他一樣。此處be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)?，F(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)而奮斗．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖示，談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的．作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么辦？要求：短文需包含提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；語(yǔ)句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)，中國(guó)人正在努力做貢獻(xiàn)，接下來(lái)介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學(xué)家如何做貢獻(xiàn)的，最后表示我們作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)91. 年3月9日，福建省教育廳在其網(wǎng)站發(fā)布《關(guān)于推遲中小學(xué)早上上學(xué)改革的相關(guān)舉措征求意見(jiàn)》，向公眾征求意見(jiàn)和建議。你所在的學(xué)校就此進(jìn)行了網(wǎng)上問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，其中有92%的同學(xué)表示贊成，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，寫一篇80字左右的短文，闡述你贊成的理由。參考詞匯：delay 要求：1. 必須包含所有提示信息，開頭已給次，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范 3. 請(qǐng)勿在文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的信息。Delay starting time for school Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here aer my reasons.【答案】Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here are my reasons.First of all, delaying starting time at school makes sure that we can have enough sleep for a day. A good sleep will make us more active in class so that we study more efficiently. Secondly, it also offers us more time to have breakfast. Breakfast provides energy for the whole morning. No breakfast will do harm to our health and our study. What’s more, we don’t have to go to school in such a hurry, and we can also do some exercise to keep fit.All in all, delaying school starting time does good to students, We are looking forward to it.【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求闡述自己贊成推遲中小學(xué)早上上學(xué)的理由。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。17．（江蘇中考模擬）寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動(dòng)。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫一篇報(bào)刊征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。18．（四川成都外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）Our junior school life is going to be finished very soon. Looking back, we must have our special thanks to someone, or somethin