【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并對(duì)將來提出兩點(diǎn)希望。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來表達(dá)。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的面貌，這一部分使用了過去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變成了過去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文章中語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。6．書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你將代表你校2009屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿（考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)）。注意：1. 90詞左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；發(fā)言稿不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。 efforts, our parents39。 support and our classmates39。 help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿，在寫作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯，符合發(fā)言稿的格式，沒有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。7．題目②“持之以恒，方得始?！眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語(yǔ)：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much