【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 val, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來自不同國家的同學(xué)介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶祝活動，最后歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（徐州市西苑中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達一日之計在于晨。同學(xué)們，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上學(xué)路上，當(dāng)我們有充足的時間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點點會給我們帶來許多好處。請你以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。要求：1. 包含所給信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫整潔。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。開頭已給，不計入總詞數(shù)。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】點睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）假如你是李華，上周末你和幾個同學(xué)一起去了青龍寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，請根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇游記，介紹一下你愉快的周末。內(nèi)容： 1 天氣： 晴朗；2 交通： 公交車； 3時間： 早上9點到達，下午4點離開；4，活動： 賞花，放風(fēng)箏，野餐.......5 感想。要求：1 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2. 語句通順，意思連貫， 書寫工整3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息4. 字?jǐn)?shù)：不少于70字【答案】Last weekend I went to Qing Long Temple with some classmates. It was sunny on Sunday. We went there by bus at 7:00 . On the bus we talked and laughed, we were so happy. At 9 . we arrived there. We enjoyed flowers, took many pictures and flew kites in the morning. At noon we had piic at the foot of the hill. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. At 4:00 . we left Qing Long Temple and at 6:00 . got home. We were so happy, though we were tired.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，話題是假如你是李華，上周末你和幾個同學(xué)一起去了青龍寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，請根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇游記，介紹一下你愉快的周末。時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，注意表達的順序。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，所給提示就是本文的提綱要點，根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，注意使用表達順序詞。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：上周末我和幾個同學(xué)去了青龍寺。星期天天氣晴朗。我們早上7點乘公共汽車去了那里。在公共汽車上我們談笑風(fēng)生，我們很高興。上午9點我們到了那里。上午我們賞花，拍照，放風(fēng)箏。中午我們在山腳下野餐。下午我們?nèi)ヅ郎?。下?點，我們離開青龍寺，下午6點回到家。雖然我們很累，但我們還是很高興?！军c睛】書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。要學(xué)以致用。像We were so happy, though we were tired.（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達時間過得飛快，似乎幾個月前才進入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點如下：1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒有足夠的時間來進行課外活動；2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；3．你在這最后一個月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2．第3要點的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I39。m sure we will do well in the ing exam if we try our best!【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have enough time for any afterschool activities．Some students did not study hard enough before, but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into study．During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest．I39。m sure we will do well in the ing exam if we try our best!【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達如今的學(xué)習(xí)和以前的區(qū)別以及你的計劃和打算。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如usual，so much，