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聰明、大方(各舉一例)Hobbies喜歡看書,認為看書有很多好處(請列舉2個好處)Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?。在學校和同學相處融洽。上學途中遵守交通規(guī)則(舉一例)。今年,學校授予了他優(yōu)秀學生獎(Award for Best Student)Problems面臨考試,遭受壓力痛苦,他沒有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions(根據(jù)實際情況提2點建議)…要求:表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫;要點必須包括所有相關信息,并作適當發(fā)揮;詞數(shù):100 詞左右;不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質的評價報告。在表格中有非常詳細的關于Tommy各方面的內容,我們需要用正確的英語把這些內容有條理的表達出來。表格中涉及的內容較多,寫作時要注意表達的條理性。這篇作文應主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議,這一部分應該用第一人稱。同時注意表達的準確性,尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內容。【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內容完整,包含了表格中的所有內容,沒有遺漏要點。表達準確,注意了被動形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時注意了條理性,使文章具有層次感,條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結合,并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞,使文章表達的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 6.人們對于學生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們不同的觀點,并表達自己的看法。贊成的理由反對的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達思想3. 有利于外語學習1. 浪費時間2. 影響學習3. 可能上當受騙(be cheated)1. ...2. ...注意:1. 所寫內容必須包括表中各方觀點并進行合理拓展。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右,短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion